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Oh dear. That's pretty tough stuff which appears to be written in a colloquial style possibly used by people like those pictured in this story (but I cannot judge this). But I am afraid I prefer more elegant proceedings, I sympathize with the main character, though.

When the audience were shouting to what they were watching on stage, I believed to notice some Lovecraftian utterings. But I am probably wrong. Yet, I missed that gentleman because it is much more quiet when he is around. Am I getting choosey?

Anyway, even if my preferences are different, this story was well-conceived and gripping. Thank you.